Her

About a very special girl who I loved, she almost died.

She was so beautiful

Just like the sun 

The sunlight was beaming, it always glistened

I was cold and my heart ached in pain

I adored the sun so much, why did she keep leaving?

When my sun went away my heart fell into pieces

As it fell, I sat to dwell the sun I knew too well,

Now gone

The old numbing pain is back,without my sun, 

I cried tears of ice crystals

The love in my heart, now frozen in time,

I will wait for my sun until She can be mine again.

Author's Note

My first published poem

Reviews

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

This is a very lovely poem Jasmine. There is a sadness, but yet a hope that illuminates its end. And it is that hopeful optimism that you leave the reader with like a gift. A wonderful heartfelt piece of art. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and please keep writing. For expression has the power to inspire.