The Bite

This is kinda the victims side of my recent mini story "Neck thirsty vampire"

Your living, breathing..

Laughing,

 

Until.. The bite.

 

When the immortal creature sinks their teeth into your neck,

the pain.. is excruciating, deplorable.. grievous, unbearable.

You can't scream, because within half a second.. your dead.

 

You don't feel when they drop your body to the ground with a motionless thud.

 

You don't have enough time to even twitch a finger, because within half a second.. your dead.

You don't feel their hesitation.. you just feel their bite.

You don't feel their satisfaction.. you just feel their bite.

You don't feel anything, other than the excrutiating, deplorable, grievous, unbearable pain.

 

 

 

Author's Note

This is kinda the victims side of my recent mini story "Neck thirsty vampire"

Reviews

[Martina]

well done once again,
this is well written
and very creative!
I like it ^_^
keep on writing!

[HappyAccident]

This strikes me more as a free verse rather than a story.Overall though I enjoyed it.