neck thirsty vampire.

Inspired by all the vampire stories about.

Thirst.          

 

looking at their neck,

I can practically see their sweet blood through their thin, pale, light skin.

 

I was so ready and so tempted to just lunge forward and sink in my teeth.

My throat was on fire just thinking about it..

I closed my eyes tight and held my breath, but..  considering i didn't have much to focus on, my ears picked up their heart beat. The fire in my throat was wild, stubborn and excited, I tried my best to ignore the pain in the back of my throat and the obsessive heart beat in the back of my mind.

 

The beat of their heart was pulling me closer and draining my thoughts.

 

Without hesitation or control i leaped forward and put out the unbearable fire.

 

The heart beat disapeared along with my thirst.

 

I was selfish.. but my throat tingled with satisfaction.

 

 

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Reviews

[Needy]

I like it :))

[Martina]

A few spelling mistakes, but it's still good.
Well done :)

[TeenRomance2]

Ooo I like it =^-^= Especially how it ends.

[Cytosine]

I don't see that much writing from this point of view. I like it, but I think you should choose a gender for the victim.