memory

if
all
of
life
was
simple
the simple man would rule
but
life
is
complicated
be
thankful
you're
no
fool.

Author's Note

first attempt at poetry

Reviews

[Marie]

THat's very true. Fools couldn't rule a complicated world, could they? On the other hand, a complicated person would have trouble with a simple world.

[Lucid Dreamer]

I like this poem short, simple, and funny! Great read.

[bluehill]

thanks for the comment, It helps 2 have input

[Lexi]

Its very basic and simple, but I enjoy the message behind it. The person who puts more effort into things tends to come out ahead. Well done! But the set up is a little difficult to read

[bluehill]

just experimenting really, I may not do so again....Ta for reading it in the first place

[Lexi]

Its really well written though. I loved it haha

[bluehill]

great.....I'll sleep easy now...Ha....thanks