look in my eyes

look in my eyes

A Poem by [Dark]

look in my eyes

let me jump

let me fly

 

look in my eyes

let me soar

in the skies

 

look in my eyes

at my tears

let me cry

 

look at my eyes

at the pain

let me die

© 2009 [Dark]


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i really like this it is quite deep...and as for the comment below not bad for anyone. i loved it!

Voice

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hi there, not bad for someone who is 13!!! Great flow.. abstract show of emotion.. keep it up!!! Thank you for sharing!!! =)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 12, 2009

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