death

The faint thuds from my heart

Fade

Slowly

 

The colors I see through my eyes

Collide

Disappear

 

The oxygen I gasp for

Doesn’t come

 

The noise that I hear

Is diminishing

Turned to whispers

Then vanish

 

The thuds stop

My eyes close

My mouth seals

The sound is gone

Reviews

[Somebody you've already..]

I like it it's sort and extremly enjoyable.I hope you keep writing and I look forward to whatever you come up with next.

[Samantha Ashley*]

I like how you ended the poem! Nice Job!