my savior

Awoo! Awoo! The cayoties sang

Their brown fur blowing

As they shivered in the freezing mist

 

My window lay open

The door banged and swang

Back and forth

With the strong pull o the wind

 

Drip-drop

Drip-drop

The rain from above

Drops to the floor

 

Screech

Screech

The sound of thumps

Scratches

And howls

The noises of wolves

Are heard through the door

 

As I run to the door

I locked it closed shut

As pieces of wood

Flick onto the floor

 

The cayoties keep howling

Bouncing

And pounding

As they plunge to the door

As they ripped it all off

 

The door clanged open

The roof fell down

The bunch of beast

Growled

And tip toed

 

They swung to my feet

As I yelled so loudly

As my lungs started to burn

As my feet were torn out

 

My savior arrived

Aaah!

The man yelled

He plunged his hammer

Into the wolves

And saved me

Reviews

[Legion]

Love the onomatopeia in this. :)

[Akash]

a well written piece of work
i really love the way you used words llike
awoo
drip-drop
Screech