Mirror, Mirror

Sometimes a mirror is your biggest enemy

Mirror, mirror on the wall,
I just want to be thin pretty and tall.

Mirror, mirror if I change my hair,
Will someone finally start to care?

Mirror, Mirror if I starve myself I’ll be beautiful,
forget my health. 

Mirror, mirror if I cut my wrist,
Will I feel like I exist?

Mirror, Mirror can’t you see,
What you show is killing me.

Reviews

[SweetWriter88]

Truth! Everything in this is so truthful and so real that's a crying shame. I love how simplistic this is, and how truthful and raw you are in your words. I love when writers say truthful things and don't hold back with their words. It's like a slap of reality.

Well done ^.^

[Grey Evanescent]

No matter how beautiful or unhealthily thin you are it will never change you or anything. Those things will only serve as trophies to stir your guilt for openly submitting yourself to bullying and to the society.

Learn to embrace yourself and the world will learn to love you,

Keep up the good work, I just loooove your writings.

Keep calm and love writing.

[Tamika]

This is fantastic, especially the last stanza

[Aprilpup]

:'-( :'-( This's me.....Why? I don't know

[Bubo]

Very true, your mirror can be your best friend or worst enemy, great thought and rhyming in your lines.