My second limerick

Please read it!!!!!

There once was a girl called  Candy,

she liked to scream and cry loudly,

her parents asked her to stop,

but she jumped like a frog,

finally she cried louder than a baby.

Reviews

[Anson L]

Not as good as the first poem

[Kylie]

Ha ha .. very funny!!

[yoyo]

I think it is a very good poem!