head

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A Poem by skye

so dizzy

so sick

so troubled

so thick


demented

resented


medicate

affectionate

© 2010 skye


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This one makes me stop and wonder, there are many ways to percieve. :) wonderful, as always, dear.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Woah your poems are so little, but so powerful! amazing job of course 100/100%.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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. wow !! ... pretty amazing selection of words !!! ...


Posted 14 Years Ago


You're all over the place, aren't you?

I like the flow until "medicate". I feel like it's too abrupt and doesn't belong.
But that's just my personal opinion.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This describes tons of thoughts...But I love it. ;]

Posted 14 Years Ago


rapid fire pulse of emotions and state of mind~ well done!

Posted 14 Years Ago


this made me smile, especially the last two lines.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on November 7, 2010
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