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A Poem by skye
so dizzy so sick so troubled so thick
demented resented
medicate affectionate
© 2010 skye
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This one makes me stop and wonder, there are many ways to percieve. :) wonderful, as always, dear.
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Woah your poems are so little, but so powerful! amazing job of course 100/100%.
Posted 13 Years Ago
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. wow !! ... pretty amazing selection of words !!! ...
Posted 14 Years Ago
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You're all over the place, aren't you?
I like the flow until "medicate". I feel like it's too abrupt and doesn't belong.
But that's just my personal opinion.
Posted 14 Years Ago
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This describes tons of thoughts...But I love it. ;]
Posted 14 Years Ago
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rapid fire pulse of emotions and state of mind~ well done!
Posted 14 Years Ago
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this made me smile, especially the last two lines.
Posted 14 Years Ago
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Added on November 7, 2010
Last Updated on November 7, 2010
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skyealvin, TX
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