my girl jealousy

my girl jealousy

A Poem by skye

from elated to jaded,

moods were easily suppressed.

a simple photograph proved nothing,

except how easily i get depressed.

© 2010 skye


Author's Note

skye
i saw a picture of the girl i like with her best friend (a male)
i automatically jump to the conclusion that theyre dating and i lose my mind...
writing this actually stopped me from cutting myself.

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I like this your emotions are well expressed

Posted 14 Years Ago


It's good that you expressed yourself in a possitive way. Great write

Posted 14 Years Ago


I'm glad you've found a much healthier form of self expression, sometimes you just want to bleed out all the pain, when it feels as if your heart may burst. This is a well written piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I have been there done that before, its just a picture calm down! it will be ok. thats another reason i dislike Facebook/myspace and i come on here instead. very good poem. keep writing, its ok.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I remember those days all too well~ you've related their crushing aspect powerfully in four lines~

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on October 22, 2010
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