On My Cloud

On My Cloud

A Poem by Payal Saxena

While playing with the rainbow,
Didn't realize when I slipped down.
Tried make others laugh,
Instead got their frown.
Tried touching stone in diamond,
But hard cheese was playing at other end.
Tried freeing my soul from pain,
But all hands I tried were in vain.
Brain surrendered But,
Dreams still ran in my blood.
This opened the eyes of the power
Which were at times shut.
Tears of heart made him melt.
Some compassion just crept.
Again dry heart touched some dew.
Again the world seemed to be new.
The generous power heard the loud.
I am back again on my cloud.

© 2016 Payal Saxena


Author's Note

Payal Saxena
Its never too late.

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Well written and expressed!
So glad you are back on your cloud:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Payal Saxena

8 Years Ago

thanks for liking my lines.
this is really good, i enjoyed this one

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Payal Saxena

8 Years Ago

Thank you. thanks a lot
Payal Saxena

8 Years Ago

Thank you. thanks a lot

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Payal Saxena
Payal Saxena

Delhi, India



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