living

living

A Poem by payalspeaks

i am only living
but i am not living

i pay so much attention to others
i pay so much attention to the feelings of others

i forget myself
i forget that i have a reason here
i forget that i have to take care of myself

i need to breathe
i need to understand 
i need to comprehend the reason for my existence

when i pay attention to myself
when i pay attention to the feelings that i process

i will be living 

© 2016 payalspeaks


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something we all forget at times..ourselves. Especially those of that like to watch the rest of society and try to understand them! we can get lost in doing that so easily..you have summed it up nicely, well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


payalspeaks

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much
Your thoughts carry an intimate glimpse at your soul, yet flow with a universal cry for all of us to know who we are, and to find what life is really all about. So deeply profound. xo

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

payalspeaks

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much, i appreciate this

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payalspeaks
payalspeaks

Canada



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I am just someone who likes to make sense out of something or trying to understand the concept of a person/place/object and creating a new meaning or significance to it I am also the person who expre.. more..

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A Poem by payalspeaks