Hopeless

They can't

Read my mind

They don't know

How to find

A way to make me smile

A way to make me smile.

 

They don't

Understand,

Why I'm so

Depressed again

Why I'm pushing them away

Why I've changed dramatically.

 

What has gotten into me?

Hurting so severely I can hardly breathe

The simplest things seem so impossible

Is this minor sadness or something resulting in something

suicidal?

 

They say it's as if I'm Hopeless

      Dreamless

         Emotionless

It's as if I've died inside

There are secrets behind these light brown eyes

I'm only half way dead,

Believe me I'm almost there.

Reviews

[Legacy]

PaxtonBelieves~,

We have become sucked into your emotions here, Paxton.

Something this bold, deserved the bold type, had it been another - the power would have been absent.

I hear your written screams, I see the pain dripping from these words - Pain is an always thing - best written, directed and heard... never spoken.

Heed advice from one so small in your world - control it not the reverse.

Remember: If you are in pain... your not dead!

Beautifully crafted, Paxton!

Have a great week,

Legacy

(May want to consider entering this poem into the Dark Secrets contest on Poetic Infusion Society's page!

[She comes, when I call ..]

Wow. Such a strong piece. I wanna read more poetry like this!

[Allie :)]

Hannah, my dear Lord, you amaze me.
Lost in confusion, and you don't know how to find your way out.
People try to ask you what's wrong, but you know that they won't understand...
You're an amazing poet, and brave for hanging in there :)