Break of Night

dazed and confused, i seem to be

trapped in a tempest

shattered and broken, you'll find me

caged by my own fences

wondering and wandering, i am left

persistent yet weary

joy and comfort, i crave the most

oh, fleeting euphoria!

Reviews

[A.Pinto]

Lovely diction and rhythm. The inverted sentences are very attention grabbing. A very powerful piece with great imagery.

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shattered and broken, you'll find me
caged by my own fences

Such powerful lines here, deep profound piece, Love it!