Heart of Empty Melodies

It beats without stop

And has music without sound

 

It is the holder of life

yet is never there

 

It created darkness

Yet light was created also

 

It beats for balance

and universal peace

 

It hopes for connection

and love within all

 

It destroys all opposed

and protects all good

 

It fights without a weapon

against total coruption

 

It knows all things to be known

and shares this knowledge

 

It beats for full life

It beats for total death

 

It takes no side in our wars

Yet helps both to victory

 

This is no ordinary heart

This is the Heart of Empty Melodies

Reviews

[CJ]

I love this one!!! It is cool how you put things like, "It takes no side in our wars. Yet helps both to victory"
I love how it has opposites....i know it makes it confusing to some people but it really is beautiful that way....
Great write!!! WRITE MORE!!!! o and if i haven't told you, i never thought you could write so well from just looking at you. Just didn't seem the type.

[Gary H]

Very clever. Like the way it builds up and ends on the opening title. The 'Darkness is created by it' line is a bit out of sync. I can understand why you have written it that way though. Maybe 'It creates darkness' would have fitted?

[Char]

good job

[sabrina]

Nice, I love the title, it almost reminds me of a riddle, if that's a good thing.

[Steve]

Cool! ike it!

[Justin Tobey]

This is great! I really like the lines "It knows all things to be known and shares this knowledge." It reminded me of the Universal Conscious inherent in many spiritual systems. Your poem is quite good and speaks to me on many levels. Thanks for sharing! : )

~~ Justin Tobey