The Mother's Haiku Package

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Love’s strength

 

Love, power in heart

Unexplainably strong

It can emit dreams

 

 

Mother

 

Caring in all ways

Giving love to her children

The real full time job

 

 

The Three Things a Mother Says the Most

 

 I really love you!

You got that from your dad’s side.

Don’t be late for school!

Reviews

[gemma]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww its so cute i really thin that is right but i think you need to show the other side of mothers like the way they cant stand you and some discomfert in their lives

[Justin Tobey]

As always, I think you did well. My only comment is that I think the syllable structure might be wrong for a haiku. Correct me if I'm wrong, because I've only written one myself. : )