The question poem

What is stronger than a mother's love?

The huge sun or the stars above?

 

How did earth come to be?

With its land and its sea?

 

Why are we on earth here now?

Is it something that god allowed?

 

Why did dinosaurs have to die out?

Why are they not walking about?

 

Why does love leave so fast?

Are humans made to last?

 

Why are we thinking and writing?

I actually find it quite exciting!

 

 

 

Author's Note

I was wondering...

Reviews

[Char]

GOOD JOB

[Justin Tobey]

This is good! The rhythm is a little bit off, but not so much that it bothered me while I was reading it. One thing I'd correct is that I think you forgot the word "we" in "Why are on Earth now?" between the "are" and "on." I don't know if that was on purpose or if I'm reading it wrong. Anyway, great job!

[Char]

grrr i kno! sometimes i just have a million questions.....