Spring is the season

This is a spring poem i thought of

Winter's cruelty is over

Spring revives the land

every daisy and clover

its time to take a stand

against the snow and cold

I can pass pass my time

watching flowers unfold

and hearing the birds chime

the warmth is now here

the animals show their faces

spring has made a thing clear

winter is gone with all of its traces

now its time to prance and play

kindness and joy has filled the air

spring is here and here to stay

what fun spring is! i proudly declare

Reviews

[Char]

i miss the sun today =[

[sabrina]

oooo, that's about everything you can say about spring, and every line ryhmed, it makes me feel happy

[Justin Tobey]

This is really good!!! I'm in shock!!! It really gave me the feeling of joy, hope, and, well, spring!!! Good job!

[CJ]

GOSH PAUL!!!!! This is great! Some of your poems make me think that I'm not too good!!
AHHHH!!!! lol
but still...great job!

[Raven Pegasus]

Definately puts you in the mood for spring to stay...great job!

[Brandon]

Nice written. Good Job.