best of me

abrupt.

how much more
do you need to take
how much more of me
must be destroyed
for you to see,
that I'm only
a set of brittle
bones, tainted with
the blood of who
I used to be...

you've already taken
so much, you coveted
my pride, my happiness,
what else do you need
from me to keep yourself
whole?

I'd let you take the best of me,
but you already got that
a while ago.

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Sad piece, but very well written. it is sad how many relationships end with
these same feelings. Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[child of God]

This is a very beautiful poem the sad thing is millions. Of people feels and thinks like this and the other side the side that you are talking. To those people. Usually. Don't care that they are breaking. People's self-esteems. You protraded this very well thank you for pending this Wonderful Read. A pleasure to read
Broken Girl