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A Poem by paul

I remember when music used to move me
I don't listen to it anymore.
the infinities keep visiting
but I don't answer

© 2012 paul


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Interesting. Good work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I first heard Coletrane when I was thirteen, ran home and with pencils with
worn erasers, cried and wrote poems..I havent cried in a long time..hder.
good work

Posted 12 Years Ago


Short and sweet but also thought provoking.
I miss music after a spell without it. Plug in those headphones and give it a whirl again!

I like the vagueness of the last two lines. It gives your poem personality!

Posted 12 Years Ago


You don't need to say much in a poem to make it moving. Nicely done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A poetic black hole!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I remember so much that used to bring me joy and moved me..but so much has changed since then..
So wonderful to be reading from you again..

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very intriguing.

Chloe

Posted 12 Years Ago


Clever,very sad poem,resigned.Well written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Four lines
bend my mind

Posted 12 Years Ago


So vast and compelling, this poem opens the mind, a sheer simplistic evermore. When all is nothing and nothing is all. Great work here.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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