stars

the stars in the sky

dream dreams in the

night

everywhere madness

spreads like light.

Reviews

[Isolophobe]

such a magnitude plainly stated. few times have i felt anyone besides bukowski did the whole short poem well, but i see now that you've always done so.

[Nishant Gupta]

beautifully explained,nice efforts, read mine too " QUEST OF LIFE".

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the primal howl ~ ursus major at the belly of the stag~ there be wolves in the milky way~

[Siddhartha]

So simple and yet so profound!

[Violetta Alexis]

I would suggest writing,

"Dream in the night"

Otherwise, simple, but pretty.

[.]

then I embrace the madness...

[Ed Hart]

you are spreading light here

[arbitrary jane]

... this feels like a rhyming couplet at the end of a great shakespeare act... now all you need to do is write the play!

[.........]

It's so simple but somehow carries great meaning

[Robin]

for what is a telescope without focus ...