cars

the cars in the street

dream dreams

in the night

alone and lonely under

a pale 

moonlight

Reviews

[An Ordinary Woman]

It's a mystical thing, isn't it? To watch cars coming and going.
Loves the delicate rhyme and gentle but sure message

[h d e rushin]

it is so hard to see words like pale and moonlight and not invision
Alfred Noyes's The Highwayman. Good imagery is never wasted.
Thanks for this share......hder

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

...like a Dog, ever waiting to go for a run...

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Impressive! I bet those cars are out there dreaming dreams waiting for someone to come along and start them up. I really like this.

[Siddhartha]

infectious!

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my car dreams of being a ferrari..but wakes up to a terrible truth..

[Robin]

this sets a scene and a mood that may keep a few awake at night ..

[Sindhuja Seshadri]

alone and lonely under
a pale
moonlight, is that why you made stars dream dreams too, in your other poems? :-)

[Brad]

i'm begining to want to wish my truck good night now when i go to bed..

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

what a curious mood permeates as I contemplate the vision flowing from your words~to animate the inanimate . . . . do cars dream of electric people? =)~