infinity III

infinity III

A Poem by paul

at night the sky
at sky the night infinity fights

a lonely fight

infinity fights a lonely fight.


at sky the night
at night the sky

infinity cries
a lonely cry

infinity cries

© 2011 paul


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I love the wraparound dive through~ scuba~ing words~ delight

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Yes, it does. That you hear it and let us in on it with such precision about the sense of the universe is overwhelming. It can't be easy for "infinity" to experience isolation at night; nights are so endless. The line "at sky the night infinity fights" is an astonishing line. The phrase "night infinity" is uniquely profound.

Posted 13 Years Ago


poor infinity...maybe we can do something to help...maybe it's all those free radicals

Posted 13 Years Ago



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