infinity II

out here in the night

or in the day, infinity

is just a run away

just a run

run away.

in the end though

it's much too soon

infinity sings a fatal

tune.

infinity sings.

Reviews

[Dove]

I like this poem. The line that really caught my attention was "infinity sings a fatal
tune."
This poem is short but brilliantly written.

[kmartell]

we live in such profundity... like carrying a big bill-board around in front of a diner, the only thing on the bill-board is a large question mark.

All those going into the diner most of the time instead of thinking about the infinate universe that surrounds them, would much rather have a hamburger. They come out after eating their hamburger and all they have to say is "burp"

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nicely continued..again you add a depth that makes your reader..think! nice

[Ruth]

Unsettling in a good thought provoking manner love!
What is infinity? Truly? What depths does it hold?
Interesting!
xx

[Emily B]

siren songs . . .

[Ed Hart]

behind the singing are the 'strings', resonating the long breath of spirit...and in all of that we have membership

[Emily Rae]

i love the line, "infinity sings a fatal tune." gracefully harsh!

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It does, doesn't it? Very few hear it singing though, and fewer still can identify fatal tunes. These words here are very profound.