madness in

beach waiting

for waves

to orchestrate

like a sand grain

or a star

and out at night

and in the day

madness always

in the way

of what lies

beneath the sea.

madness in

my veins at night

and  in the day there's

too much light

madness in the night.

Reviews

[africa]

This is very cool. Dreamy too

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Another really cool poem. Sometimes it seems like madness is every where. I like this a lot, I like your style.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Madness, indeed.

[Black]

i love it..
paul, dutch?>sounds dutch xD

[Ruth]

And in-between madness stirs ate very seams that hold us together in a world of beauty! Wow! I love this!
xx

[...]

I just had to come back to this, Paul. You are a genius beyond compare. You are divine - the most profound human creation. You are the dream human of every God. I am blessed to read you, to learn from you, and to celebrate your gift. You are a hero, possibly the greatest I have ever known.

[Brittany W]

Beautiful write.

[...]

Madness does obstruct so many wonderful ways in which sanity can express itself. These maddening waves are intimidating and overwhelming. You detail the thought impeccably in your words. They are so true.

[Elizabeth]

Spot on, Paul. I love that this is a bit longer than your usual pieces and still maintains your signature brevity. I know exactly what you mean ... night and day have their own terrors.