shadows

shadows casting light

out here in the night.

no chance of love

spinning out in space

my mind in a race

with time

Reviews

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I agree. There's no chance of love when there's no chance of love. A mind spinning out in space is the only type of mind that can race "with" time. It's like being out of the canvas but in the frame at the edges. Time is witness to lovers yet isolated from them, and those with the times, or time, are isolated from love. Filling time and space and mind is a challenge. You face it with brilliant brevity. I have a lot to learn from ye.

[Yevette Lee]

Simply short sweet and unique ...

[Emily Rae]

I love this. especially the simple ending, "with time"

[Robin]

"shadows casting light " how you spin the imagination ..

[Lilly Negoi]

racing sands under black light can indeed be a whirling experience...

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

How can something be so soft,beautiful and yet so sad..all of it at the very same time..