ocd

madness

clouds my mind

unlike the stars

that speckle

the night sky

infinities can't 

stop counting

like ocd

Reviews

[...]

There are countless times that I've wondered about the clock ticking and time just running out of time. Your words have the perfect image of the limitless moments of isolation - while waiting for isolation to end.

[MarissaVicious]

I have ocd as well, and this is perfect that last 3 lines. really bring out the way we all are.

[Angela]

Sounds like one who knows." Infinities can't stop counting." Truth and sorrow

[Elizabeth]

Brevity at its finest. I love your single serving style... but you know that. I also love how you seem to draw inspiration from the sky, particularly the night sky. You're so right, too... about infinities being unable to just stop somewhere. Anywhere.

[.]

how you manage to convey so much in so few words astounds me..especially with such an intense subject

[Brad]

like robins suggestion...i gave up on counting

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

count from the center outward along the second hand~ it's a trippy trip like a girl on wallpaper with ocd fingertips a drumming patterns into sheetrock~ =)~

[Emily B]

I find myself counting, sometimes, I haven't gotten to infinities yet, I always lose my way . . . but one day,

maybe . . .

[Robin]

try counting backwards ...

[arbitrary jane]

infinities can't stop counting. :)
that line was brilliant.
much like a star.