scared

scared

A Poem by paul

scared to backflip
out of my mind

it's a strange universe to swim in
if you're not a fish

© 2011 paul


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it is a strange universe.
strange and wonderful.
and i'm pretty sure you can outswim any fish.


Posted 13 Years Ago


but still ... i swim

Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh yeah. And so I just try to hang in there...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Self Contained Underwater Breathing Apparatus. SCUBA
I guess that doesn't help with the back flip outta the mind thing.
Your work really makes the synapses to fire in a more energetic way. Always a good read here...

Posted 13 Years Ago


we were all sperm once, and we swam like b******s for that chance to get at the egg...just like outside the womb to some degree

Posted 13 Years Ago


whales aren't fish - and boy, do they swim...:)...

Posted 13 Years Ago


you are a fish

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

and that is why I always pay the closest attention to Old Man Koi~ he knows . . . .

Posted 13 Years Ago


I keep trying to be a fish. I hang out in bath tubs and swimming pools, the ocean once upon a time. And then I get all pruney and I have to come back to reality.

I like your words

Posted 13 Years Ago


Even if you were a fish... it might be a bit dicey.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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