this

this

A Poem by paul

this is my movie
this sky blues
for me
though maybe I am
dead already
as I wait for news from
the other side

© 2011 paul


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...
the sky that blues for you
is on your side
and what's on your side
is all yours
blues, greens et al

Posted 13 Years Ago


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no ...this is my movie...

Posted 13 Years Ago


maybe , maybe

Posted 13 Years Ago


oh, you are not, not if you see the blue sky

Posted 13 Years Ago


chained in the purgatory, everything seems gray. what torment, my friend...

Posted 13 Years Ago


seen~ seen in every bend of smoky shadow~

Posted 13 Years Ago


what other side

Posted 13 Years Ago


ah and i miss the simple procedural transcendence you submit our attentive little eyes to witness. i think what i've said about how monumentally attesting to moments your words are can only be furthered by saying they are the perennial child of what moment they detail.

Posted 13 Years Ago


this sky blues for me.

good stuff.

Posted 13 Years Ago


the other side intrigues me.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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