ships worry

ships worry

about sinking

skies worry

about rain

in the end 

all the thinking

only ends

in pain

Reviews

[...]

sheer genius
and so rare
yes, we think
because we care
to think
the pain though
is an unwanted dough

[arbitrary jane]

i love these dart-shot, stinging stabs of truth.
bullseye.

[.]

is that why my head hurts? LOL

worrying the most useless emotion known to man..

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

"All the thinking" what a grand and unattainable thought, that ships and skys's have working meaning and worries to creak and rage about - well written and qutie scary when reading for the first time at least.

[Robin]

yes , better off in the knowing

[Alicante lullaby]

yes,thinking ends in pain.

[Ms. Gruye]

i dig the random personification. viva la

[Siddhartha]

Oh, you are the master of brevity Paul. you assimilate so much meaning in so few words. It's brilliant!