drops

do the drops of water know

they're part of the sea

or are they oblivious like you

of me

Reviews

[...]

probably oblivious
brilliant words
these are
they know more
than they show

[Kesha]

So simply spoken but so perfectly woven! Very good! I like this :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

We are 70% water, so the question really is do the drops of water know they are part of me and you, or not at all - well done!

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Yes

and

No

Nice thought provoking shortster.

[.]

simplistic divinity! This is the wisdom in a nutshell..sigh...love this...

[Robin]

ask the ripples

[Elizabeth]

do they, indeed... my guess is no. But I can't speak on their behalf, of course.

[Ms. Gruye]

i guess the obvious only depends on what you are looking for.

[Ace Of Hearts]

i like it. simple and vulnerable

[Siddhartha]

Don't know, but you made me think for sure.