another day

another day free of madness

the sky alone

with its sadness

the sky has something to say

but its voice has gone

away

Reviews

[...]

in a voiceless isolation
you thrive
in absolute desolation
you jive
there's so much more
to these words
meanings stocked
in herds
your brilliance astounds
in so many sounds

[Alicante lullaby]

the sky has something to say

but its voice has gone away...
breathtaking.

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[Sel Whiteley]

Beautiful, carpe deim. Most of all, I love the sound, the sibilance of s and the rhyme, true music.

[Ed Hart]

one day at a time, sweet jesus

[Lilly Negoi]

or maybe we don't know how to listen to it anymore...

[Robin]

some times silence is best ..

[Elizabeth]

Poor, poor sky. Full of intentions that will never be heard :(