pretend

at nighttime the sky

the moon

and the sea

pretend

that they don't know me

they pretend

they pretend

Reviews

[Kesha]

I don't usually like short poems, but yours I enjoy very much! Another great write! :)

[arbitrary jane]

it's a ruse. they want you some night to walk out that moonpath lying there on the top of the water, and come for a visit. mooncakes and philosophy till morning.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I have to say, I enjoy the simplistic raw energy of your writing, I find myslef breathing along with the wording as if it were alien, whaling of course due to your imagery, it is, well done.

[Nothing Personal]

just breathtaking. the repetition does the trick. Some evil, dark secret or some clandestine, love affair whatever's hidden behind those veils

[Sel Whiteley]

Haunting, particularly the repetition on the closing stanza.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

echoes of beautiful ghosts~

[Robin]

thats why we have to keep our eyes on them ..

[Narnie]

It's quite a frightening thought when we believe we belong with them.

[Lilly Negoi]

regular spectator of nightscapes :) nice

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

This is great. I'm, a big fan of many images/few words.

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