wishes

at night the sky wishes

it was the sea

wind maddens minds

fish wish they were free

the wind blows 

blind

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

"fish wish they were free" and men wish they had the call of the sea on their brow, well written, simple and effective to no end, well done!

[Nothing Personal]

there's night, there's sky, there's wind , there's mind, there's fish and their wishes..
that's all it takes isn't it?
we wish we are what we never can be

[Sel Whiteley]

This is my favourite of the three I have read, particularly "wind maddens minds"/"blows blind". You have a great economy of words.

[Nida Lodi]

whatever wish every creation of this universe makes....every wish is somehow the same wish....a wish to be free...and being free is the most blessed blessing of Almighty...

[Siddhartha]

To be or not to be? To be, always...

[Elizabeth]

Isn't that always the way? To wish to be what we can never be...

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Good stuff here. There are many scenarios playing off of these simple, well placed words. The last word blew my mind.
Excellent!

[Jennifer Lenhardt]

i like this. i like how you've given persona to the sky and the fish. it's interesting how often we wish we were something else when we are perfectly made into who and what we're supposed to be, just like the fish in the sea.

[Alicante lullaby]

if wishes were fishes
i'd have tinned tuna everyday
even though i hate it:)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

if wishes were fishes
we'd all
cast nets~
=)~