to die

skies

unending lies

infinities die.

skies stretched taut 

it's a small world 

to die in.

Reviews

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Sad but true...

[Lilly Negoi]

dying doesn't require much space :)...

[Emily B]

someone was talking about the size of the world the other day, and I mentioned the ant, how small we think his universe is, and how well it fits his own height.

I find that infities change, my room alternates between being way too large for little me, and way too small for gigantic me. It depends on how I'm seeing. I have it on good authority that our world doesn't change too much.

[Siddhartha]

Love the way you carefully distill words...so freaking reminds me of ernest hemingway...

[Nothing Personal]

existence is a tiny bliss
considering the big, black, stretching cosmos out there
with most of it just
empty spaces..

[Robin]

so it goes ...

[em]

- ah! - it's a small world - to die in - just heartbreakingly sad - sad and fragile and beautiful! - living doesn't fit into the bigness of the world - and so dying gets snipped at the edges -

[Alicante lullaby]

again you do wonders with very less words.