everything

everything

A Poem by paul

everything is lost
the sky, the biggest cost

everything
is lost

everything is free
the sky, the wind, the sea

everything
is free

© 2011 paul


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I've sent messages on all forums "the sky, the wind, the sea". Wonderful write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


What is lost
Is always free
Free from the man's clasp
From his greedy clasp...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Perspectives..
Sometimes tables turn too..by 180 degrees..

Posted 13 Years Ago


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- ah - immeasurable losses, now - who knew - how much free cost! -

Posted 13 Years Ago


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the things that matter indeed are free...

Posted 13 Years Ago


when everything is lost, everything is free.
when everything is free, everything is lost.
nothing.

such an obvious thing to see, yet so genius when nobody seems to see it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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yeah

there's nothing left
to be bereft of
nothing at all
no thing
just space
free space

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

there is enjoyment in the simplicity but flirts with a feeling of something more hidden behind the initial meaning.. it leaves one wanting more..

Posted 13 Years Ago



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