m

madness

madness

in the street

infinities crumble

beneath my feet

I step off

life's edge

everywhere I go

I wind up

dead

Reviews

[...]

perhaps they're meant to crumble
but you've got to write on
as brilliantly
being dead is no excuse

[Self Loathe]

sometimes i manage to pretend ... but this, i can only learn from.

[em]

- some times - i'm late - even when i don't have anywhere to be - but your writing - just breaks the din like nothing else could - you're a true genius, mister! -

[Emily B]

it's almost like you are haunted by a dream

[Narnie]

it's like these thoughts are nagging you. But each time you place the words from a different perspective. If I was to really, really put my pop psychology hat on, I would say you are like an artist brushing single stroke to one day complete the canvas. What will happen when it is complete though? I kinda know that feeling. Then I decided one day that sometimes - sometimes - there are no answers or completion and we just have to skip along making the best of what we have. It made everything easier. But maybe that was just my excuse.

[Robin]

moment by moment , such is the fate of change

[Nothing Personal]

hmmm to your m. M for madness , m for mean and m for megalomania..I hate to advertise but you reminded me of my own "Madness & Civilization" which is a lengthy exercise to this craziness. Well driven poem

[.]

. remarkable title ... and an even more remarkably perfect poem ... you are a true thinker and poet, coach ...

[Sunni Davis]

brilliant work! I love the flow of this and the raw emotion behind your words.

[Dani]

"everywhere I go
I wind up

dead"

well damn. read my mind.
once again, you're brilliant.