the wind

the wind blows secrets the air

will never tell

the wind waves sound and 

blows madness around

like leaves infected by

desire

the sun cold and the moon 

on fire

the wind pleads

in a language nobody

understands

Reviews

[Siddhartha]

Ah! the wind.the wind.Shapeless.Formless.But never yielding.

[Dani]

you say perfectly in forty words what I say in hundreds.
bloody hell. I'm in awe.

[Greg Skura]

A great writer once said it is difficult to rope the wind. Great writing here!

[Robin]

sailors get the hint ..

[Isolophobe]

A beautiful world has been shown here, and I can't help but feel like I am apart of it and understand a little more because of these words of yours.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

the wind pleads
in a language nobody
understands
...love those lines :)

[.]

you turn images on their heads..as the mysterious wind blows!

[Nothing Personal]

I like the oxymoron s here and the message and the atmosphere it builds..Mysterious, inanimate, surreal piece..Has a nostalgic, sad feel for some reason..

[em]

- i got smoke in both my eyes - just reading your poem - it was the wind, perhaps - trying to tell me something - maybe its a language i don't understand yet - but for the first time maybe - i listened - it could be - a life lesson - who knows yet - except you - you decipher the elements - and i'll learn - by watching - cause the smoke - i can blink it out - the lessons they never leave - :) -