on the water

on the water

the light

casts spells

old hungers 

resurface

the calm sea

awaits the storm

Reviews

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. yeah ... i like storms ... at least they mean something ... they say something ... they do their jig ... i don't like when they kill ... but i like them when they are flamboyant ... without causing devastation ... like a troupe of dancers ... storms the dance floor ... if everyone in it is dancing for the other ... completely connected ... like the ingredients of a storm ...

[Ed Hart]

for all its drama, who would willingly leave the strong voice of the sea

[Nothing Personal]

Oh top stuff here..A Carolina beach..A dark night and a light to write on the sand..Well done friend..

[Akshat♥]

nice title to this poem..
without water everything seems finished..
the picture here quite nice where reflection occurs on water..
nice write:)