on the water

on the water

the light

casts spells

old hungers 

resurface

the calm sea

awaits the storm

Reviews

[.]

. yeah ... i like storms ... at least they mean something ... they say something ... they do their jig ... i don't like when they kill ... but i like them when they are flamboyant ... without causing devastation ... like a troupe of dancers ... storms the dance floor ... if everyone in it is dancing for the other ... completely connected ... like the ingredients of a storm ...

[Sunni Davis]

Simple, yet powerful. Well done.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

'old hunger resurfaces'..there is light in your words perhaps even you dont realise how deceiving these simple words are..they are much more wise than they seem.

[Robin]

the nature of nature - anticipation

[Emily B]

this is gorgeous!

[em]

- and to wait - for a storm - for change - for a shift - for movement - for transition - for freedom - no easy work there - those storms always stir things up - and sometimes - they don't know where to stop - but they sure do stir!! - i agree with serah - when they're flamboyant - they talk!! -

[Narnie]

I like it when nature is projected with emotions. I can't help but think they are perhaps more believable and 'real' than human ones. Perfect stilness before the rush.

[OT]

the sense of foreboding as the sea awaits the storm... what will come as the light bewitches the water! nice!

[Kerry O'Connor]

Beautiful word-picture, emotive and moody.

[Lilly Negoi]

looks like chasing the will'o-wisp...