thoughts

at nighttime the wind

schemes

to blow dreams away

the future remembers

the past

thoughts f**k

everything up

Reviews

[Greg Skura]

Well stop thinking! lol !!! Nicely stated.

[Nothing Personal]

thoughts
why do I think and not dream
Dreams die as
thoughts live on

[Robin]

that they do ... that they do ...

[OT]

oh yes!! thoughts can be the downfall of civilisations - so many things stem from a simple little thought...

[em]

- stunned - yes i am - like serah - since she read this poem out to me - and as i'm typing - the azaan is beckoning the soulful - to say a prayer - i'm saying a quiet one - here's to dreams - standing their ground!! -

[.]

. stunned ... yes, thoughts f**k everything up ... you bet they do ... you astonish me ... truly ... i'm so stunned ...

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Thoughts always f**k everything up..

[Lilly Negoi]

your poems always have an elemental quality - if it's not the water, it's the air - i do wish i'd see the fire and earth too...

[Ed Hart]

yes, thoughts do interrupt the flow of things

[Shelby]

"the future remembers
the past"
That''s beautiful. For some reason, those lines really touched me. Lovely poem. Simple and sad and so true.