waves

the waves don't care about 

the sea

they just splash

unlike you and me

you to me: are just a

stupid dream

the nighttime, the day and 

the in between

in between madness

the sky far away

in between madness

the night times the day

in between you 

in between me

all that land

in between 

the sea

Reviews

[TAO]

Yet, this is the reality, or so we believe. Who is comfortable without their delusions, even if the dream is stupid? Admitting that would be admitting that it's time to die. Your poem speaks to me, Paul. It speaks directly to the soul. It's eloquent in its simplicity, but begs some very, very complex questions (at least, I'd say it does). Paul, outstanding work.

[Ed Hart]

so much life spent orienting and reorienting about the distance between

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

A lonely poem .. but also beautiful.

Chloe

[.]

i'm drowning
in the sea
as if you're pushing me
like waves splash
but it's a nightmare
you are outhere
somewhere
dreaming
of a reality
without me
while i'm dreaming
of your dreams
coming true
if only you could see
that i'm drowning
and not push me
i would submit
to the splashing waves
for you
to sea
me