scattered

scattered

A Poem by paul

words scattered
like the focus
of the wind

scatters leaves.


memories forget
what time it is

daylight waiting
in the wings


infinities
lined up
to race

time chasing
space

© 2011 paul


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you create images with single words..no mean feat.. thoughtful poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


order can be so boring ... but is fun watching time chase its tail ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


It is beautiful how the words fall down the page like fallen leaves... Such a wistful poem. Remarkable work

Posted 13 Years Ago


memories never care about what time it is. that's why they are called "memories" :). they are always there. loved the
"infinities
lined up
to race"
because indeed both time and space are infinite. memories remain however their main point of conjunction :).

Posted 13 Years Ago



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