scattered

words scattered

like the focus

of the wind

scatters leaves.

memories forget

what time it is

daylight waiting

in the wings

infinities

lined up

to race

time chasing

space

Reviews

[Nothing Personal]

You are such a mad intellect you really are. There is no way one can review you peace fully. Every piece is so good and so contending. Just does the trick and runs away. I feel like reviewing everything with a poem. Even if its a damn bad one..

Scattered words make me think
can I pick them up randomly
and write a poem

Can you make a tree
with leaves all over
the place

flood of memories
flood of images
time pauses
time wonders

The end is
still but the
beginning

[Siddhartha]

What allegory and what words...this piece delves deep into the psyche and brings out the metaphors and the similarities to be found in everyday lives and occurences...

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

The title is wonderful and certainly goes with the words of your poem.
"memories forget what time it is" ,, this is so true!
I really like that line.
"Time chasing space", yes it is ... a wonderful poem .. deep .. yet relatable.

Chloe

[Adora.xo]

This was... profound. My favorite lines: "memories forget what time it is" and "infinities lined up to race". This was mesmerizing, and there was definitely a sorrow in your words... something that is causing you to ache and sigh... Brillian job dear =']

~Adora


PS: Thank you very much for the review

[em]

- the race - up to the absent finish line - the scattered sliver of silver light - the genius of your poetic thought and expression - mesmerizing! - and of course - i agree with serah! -

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

memories forget
what time it is..there is a lingering sorrow and pain in your words..always as if they were infused in your marrow.

[Dani]

I believe you meant "daylight", not "dayight" in the fourth stanza.
Other than that, brilliant as always good sir.

funny, it's like...
my mind.

[.]

. indeed ... that's what's happening ... and i can almost never cope ... you are profoundly observant ... and that's why i have the fourth dimension ... in which the rules of the three dimensions don't work ... and everything else does ...