practicing magic

light practicing

magic

on the water

the sky tired of gambling

nighttime afraid of the day

like hearts

afraid of love

Reviews

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. ah, yes ... but i wonder sometimes if it's "the thought of being afraid of love" ... which is comforting ... so comforting ... that we can fearlessly love ... without having to face that we love ... or express that we love ... something like what eben goes through every day ... thinking that he can't do what he is already doing ... but too afraid to know ... sometimes, we're so overwhelmed that we can't bear to believe that we're overwhelmed ... while love has the last laugh always ... for it's always there ... just watching us ... trying to fight it ... when we've already lost to it ...

[Nothing Personal]

Believe me
Believe me not
The wand stares dis affectionately
Love's pure
but elusive

[OT]

ahh profundity in simplicity!! brilliant write, and a great read too!! "the sky tired of gambling" - so clever!

[.]

this poem is so alluring-
and an elegant picture of
nature relating with emotion~
(~i probably am not expressing
myself very well)~but this piece
is really just captivating~
I Love it-A Fascinating write!!!

james miles

it was short and sweet and amazing. i loved the description and word choice. nice!

[Dane Osborne]

Excellent piece and amazingly written.

[em]

- the fear of love - is the love itself - the presence of fear - stamps the presence of love - and just like that - twilight becomes - the most magical part of the day - where nighttime - meets the day - even for a moment - in heaven - and yes - i always agree with serah - and with sir hart - :) -

[Kerry O'Connor]

Your analogies are each a crystal - clear and complete in themselves.

[Ed Hart]

we already are love

[Lilly Negoi]

sky tired of gambling? :) but isn't life the perfect poker game after all?! we're always "all in" :). and we win some, or we lose some...