waves

waves in my head

thoughts in the sea

waves in my head

drowning me

Reviews

[EmpressPoetess]

sounds like the beginning to a great love song! very nice!

[em]

- i've always been an expert - at drowning - even before i knew how to swim - i knew how to drown - but one can read your voice - and just float - a miracle here in your words, indeed - like serah said - and in sir hart's response!! -

[.]

. i'm amazed at the miracle of this masterpiece and sir ed hart's response ... em and i are grateful ... for he can see us too ... and because of you ... we can see him and you ...

. i don't like drowning ... and i don't like drowning when i'm drunk ... my thoughts are intoxicating and addictive ... and i'm hooked to their spunk ... coach, you have a lot of spunk ... what a gem of a poem ...

[Robin]

only a surfer knows the feeling ...

[Kerry O'Connor]

I've had similar thoughts today...

[Ed Hart]

those waves are as much us as our blinking eyes...i see you

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Waves in my head drowning me..:)..i know that feeling.