poems float

poems float

on the water

fish swim by

unseen unaware

thinking the water

is air

thoughts invade

clear minds

like storms on a 

sea

thinking of you

not thinking

of me

Reviews

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. the story of my life ... but i couldn't have said it so perfectly ... the remarkable intensity of profundity, depth, simplicity and utter genius that you transcend with each poem you write is astonishing ... yet i wish ... more than ever before ... for you ... for em ... for christopher (isolophobe) ... and everyone else who is suffering ... and me ... the thoughts of someone who is thinking of us ... may love win ... just this once ... may love last ... just this once ... may the after taste of life not be bitter ... and may our soul mates find us rather than hangout on facebook and twitter ... or worse still ... live as if nothing happened ... when we did happen to them ... when they happened to us ... here's to you, coach ... and here's also to the rest of all of us ...

[Lilly Negoi]

beautiful...i honestly cannot make up my mind about what image i like most...

[Ed Hart]

we wonder how that's possible, but adjusting to the fact of it is like climbing a high mountain...as always, your words are like jewels

[.]

enchanting write..has a simplicity with a deeper meaning just below the surface...