the river

the river is trying

to say something

we'll never understand.

and there's really only two dimensions:

in and out

Reviews

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. this is a nuclear weapon ... every word and every line destroys myths ... indeed, there are only two dimensions ... what a compelling insight ... a perfect image and a perfect derivative ... how you infer and how you express ... are lessons in life ... and of course ... poetry ... startled by this one, coach ...

[Cynthia]

such a creative write!
Really, not much people will think of this topic!

[Emily B]

perfect as a snowflake before it melts on my glove

you are the purest poet I know

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I haven't thought about it before either. Good poem. I liked it. :D
Thanks for sharing. :D

[vivekanand]

it takes me to the banks where herman hesse's siddhartha stood

[Rozu]

i've never thought about it like that before, enlightening and straight to the point

[Isolophobe]

goddammit, its been too damn long since i have read your work. funny how the simplicity of nature is still so far beyond our comprehension. speaking of funny, I first had a quite darkly humored laugh at this because its just so f*****g true.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Life itself is in two dimension..yes or no..we get lost when we chose midway..;)
as always witty,subtle an yet very deep..

[Ruth]

This is wonderful! Poignantly concise!
Everything held in tender balance!
xx

[em]

- and yet you hear - and you infer - and your translate - and you transcend dimensions - even as you define them - on point with serah -

he heard what no one else did
breathing the stillness
the river sailed less lonely

[cest la vie]

my father called me a river-deep girl..
this piece flows truth and is beautiful..