lost poems

lost poems

wind swept words

sky's full of lies

moody clouds

and an end of time

with no rhyme.

Reviews

[.]

. ohhhhhhhhhh ... this stabs ... this stings ... this bleeds ... this sings ... the wind sweeps them away ... some of 'em words that are meant to stay ... and lies fill the skies ... and time after time ... time doesn't end in sublime ... amazing, thou art ... thy art is amazing too ... this universe has done enough nixing ... and now it needs some fixing ... you are the best ... and that's why i hope ...

[Ruth]

Words lost are a heart wrench! The sky knows only sadness at that! lol
Beautiful work love!
xx

[poetic soul]

end of time,
with no rhyme!!

hats off!
very very deep and beautiful
i simply adored this poem! goes to my favs.!

[Isolophobe]

No rhyme at all. I think poems of yours could sweep across the sky at various moments in life and whoever sees them could have their moment catalyzed by what you say. they're so very definitive and inclusive that it hurts or teaches. or both.

[Dani]

"skies full of lies"
I like that line. Though it makes me think of mirrors for some reason.
anyway. Good poem.

[em]

- oh dear - i do feel that stab and sting - just like serah - you're the subject matter expert of your elements - you see them - and you speak them - like no one else does - they are all yours - and never ever shall i hear of the wind - or the sky - or the sun and the moon - without thinking about the bliss of your magical poetry -

there would be no beginnings
and no ends
without the magic of your words
the in-betweens would be barren
crafted with dense silences
unless you spoke
in your rhyme
in your time
you make the mundane
sublime

[Robin]

that rushed pause .. helpless .. resigning

[Emily B]

hey, I love your breezy words

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

looking out my window I feel your words ~wacthing grey and khol sweep the sky~

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Cloud are moody too..like me!!!..:p..thank you for your words,they will never get lost friend.

[Alicante lullaby]

tha,i love it...